Creating my character, Im new to here, not roleplaying

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Name: RavenFeather
Meaning: Her coat is the color of a raven, hence her name
Gender: Mare
Breed: Arabian
Genetics: gg/aa/EE
Age: 5 years

Arrived in Tathra: Winter, Year 1

Coat Color: Solid Black
Height: 15.3

Eye Color: Pinkish


History:
Ravenfeather was an single mare kicked out of her herd for being different in breed an non wild at first. She used to be a riders horse but rebelled and decided to kick down the fence and enjoy the free life. Once away, she found her first herd and lied about being tame. Once they found out she was driven off by the lead stallion and on her own for a full year, barely surviving the cruel weather. She now is slightly skinny and depressed, hoping to find a mate and have a family.





Sample Post: *Ravenfeather appeared on the battlefield with a shrill whinny and stormed forward, gnashing her teeth at an enemy and rearing up on her back feet and slamming her front half down onto the enemy mare. Once the mare was on the ground, Ravenfeather stomped on her sides, easily killing the mare. Once done with her, she rammed her shoulder into the side of a young stallion, biting at his skin and making him bleed. Her eyes were wide with fury and the want to win. She circled around the young stallion and reared up again, biting into his neck several times before landing and doing the same thing. She lifted her hooves and brought them down upon the young stallions back while screaming in pain as she felt a strong bite on her flank*


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From a rating of one to ten [ten being the best], what would you rate MUSTANG?:
4. its confusing. Not to mention I cant find my profile right now.
What do you suggest we do next/improve?:Improve your directory and stuff
Where did you find us?: Ads on random sites.

What would you like to be called?: Ravenfeather

[WHIPSTER.]

PENDING: Hi! Almost there, just a few things ... Her eye color must be a realistic color (i.e blue, green, gray, amber, ect) so please just change that up~ Also, she's a little tall for a purebred Arabian, so if you could bring that down to 15.0-15.2 that would be lovely. You also need some form of personality, as it is essential to the characters. Please jus add a couple lines about how she acts/is.

Also, what is confusing you, exactly? We'd love it if you'd specify so we can work out problems if there are some. <3 your profile should be right at the tippy top of the page. What about the character directory needs improvement? Let us know! We love the feedback.

@ravenfeather